Softrider ride
Don't give up on it. My wife laughed like crazy the first time I tried to ride mine. I had the same problem being a df rider my whole life. It will all come together in just a couple of rides. I leaned the bike, and didn't -turn the wheel and crashed at the end of the
driveway...
Your story
The story was written very well till you threw in the part about making it look less male. Could of left that out and had a great story.
It gave away where your mind was at.